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    The Keep (open)

    Deep in the land of Terrenus a desolate region could be found. Everything there was either dead or dying due to sever drought. Most people called it the Badlands, others stirred rumors that it was one of the many gateways into the Nine. Truth be known, at one time the Badlands was a thriving region full of green grass and forests with a river that fueled the land with life. Over time the climate shifted and soon it became what it was today, dry and dead; a true no mans land.

    Overhead a bird of prey stalked the skies in search of food upon the Desert's evershifting sands. The condor like bird drifted along for miles and miles with nothing in view. The sun had begun to set over the horizon's line of scrimmage, the breaking point where dark overthrows the light for only a short lived victory. As the sun hunkered lower and lower and ominous orange/red glow cast out over the skyline. The bird of prey focused in as shadows danced across the hills and valleys while the sands below shifted, untamed, like an ocean. Then it spotted him. A man, clad visibly in a cloak with a hood that covered his entire body. Each step the man took left tracks in the sand to be whisked away only seconds later. As the bird circled a few times it grew anxious and gave in to its hunger. It decided to attack.

    Swooping down like an armed missile on approach, the bird locked onto it's target. The man caught a slight glimpse of a shadow casting over head and just so happened to look up. At first glance one might panic if they seen a giant bird, easily seven times his own size, but the man did not panic as he looked to the sky and caught a fading glimpse of this winged raptor. Instead a smile formed on his lips as the hood was pushed back to fall over his shoulders. Long black hair shone in the shifting light while red hued orbs stared the approaching creature down with the same focus of a dragon on it's prey.

    "you will make for a nice lunch"

    The man spoke aloud to the bird as if it understood his words at all what so ever or if it could as if it cared. From under the cloak came a swift right hand which held short sword, stolen from a passed over dead body, and with one quick motion the blade was sent hurling at the creature. A high pitched shrill was followed by the decapitation of this bird. A few feathers fluttered down to the ground, riding along on the winds weightless and dancing so elegantly. The bird, however, fell with a soft and almost silent thud into the sand.

    Some say that when one's head is severed from the body they are able to bare witness to events before them for only a brief eight seconds more. Well if that were true than the bird's eyes would bare sight to a far worse predator than it ever imagined to become. A shadow crept over the man swiftly, engulfing him in darkness though still light enough to see his silhouette melt and take shapes that only monsters in the worst of nightmares could fathom. Gleaming red eyes peered from the darkness as if the dark was the entity itself. The shadow cast over where the bird lay and then it was gone, whisked away on the winds. Where the creature once lay now only remained a few bones that had been splintered and seemingly crushed by a giant maw.

    Ten to twenty miles to the south, the same wind blew through the only place that still sustained life there in the Badlands. There was a small area of lush greenery with a fair sized structure built there in the center of it all. It wasn't a castle but too large for much anything else. These were called Keeps'; military strongholds commonly used for small regiments or outposts. That wind that blew in carried with it the shadow from the sands. It cast itself over the Keep and as the sun sat below the ridge, screams of those fifty some men, women, and children could be heard for miles, but subsequently heard by no one but the sands. Then just as the screams had began, they were snuffed out.

    The man materialized at the Main Hall entrance. Both his hands pressed against the door and slid it open. He walked inside with a smile on his face while blood dripped to the stone floor.

    "Home sweet home"

    His words echoed and reverberated back through the corridors. His voice was deep and strong but held somewhat of a joyous undertone to it. He found himself, soon after, setting in the center chair within the Throne Room.


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    -There was no reason in remaining with that sour company. He trusted that his young uncle would be able to keep himself safe, and should Alukai actually require assistance, against his own better judgment he knew that he would come. But for now he had heard quite enough of all that slander against his mother, and it was growing increasingly difficult to maintain his temper in check. So he left.

    Only after having gone a good distance from Alukai and his company did Lucis feel completely comfortable and able to transform into his secondary form. He had all but forgotten the far away city that he had intended to visit. Instead, the despicable presence of that oozing black creature had caused his mind to shift uncomfortably toward isolation. Alone, he felt his blood begin to boil and his veins to unfurl as if vines attacked by heat. The change began internally and pushed out forward, first splitting the flesh directly along his spine to allow two massive leathery wings to spread out. Oddly enough there was little pain involved in the transformation, although his humanoid form was all but torn to pieces. It always felt pleasurable to feel his limbs break and mold into a form that was better encompassing of his true self.
    The rest of the change came quickly. The bone structure of his face shifted terribly and the pristine white skin tore along many lines leaving behind the glistening and magnificent fire colored scales of a red Wyrm. Of course he was not a pure bred and as his figure changed he did not reach the massive size that his father had had. Instead he appeared as a normal dragon, an elegant creature with a long face and a long elegant throat. His arms and legs shifted into muscular limbs and his fingernails went from a clear diamond shine into black talons that dug into the earth and ripped out chunks of it as it moved forward and took flight. Those leathery wings spread wide and pushed down sending a storm of dust and debris into the nearby forest.

    It was different being in the air—flying. It was freedom, although that sounded so very cliché. But it was. He kept his wings spread wide and tucked in his limbs and used his massive face to break a line in the stream of wind. He glided through the blue skies and headed as far from the mountains as possible and toward the radiating heat of the desert lands.

    He flew for hours, straight through the night and into the next morning. It wasn’t until he saw the outline of a far off keep that he felt how sore and weary his muscles had become. And it wasn’t until he was descending toward the keep that he felt the pangs of hunger actually sting his belly. It would be easier to feed as a humanoid because then he would just require blood, rather than flesh. But as he drew closer to the keep it became more and more apparent that the place was abandoned. However, the strange thing was—the smell of life was fresh, as if people had been here just the day before.

    Carefully he began to circle an opening; this was going to be a rough landing. He was an enormous creature after all, but if he could only manage to land he would quickly swap forms. Down he came upon the fitted-stone ground. His landing caused the entire keep to tremble slightly upon its foundation.-

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    He could feel his energy draining. Or was it his blood? He couldn't tell. Drenched in blood, it was difficult to tell if some of it came from him, or not.
    Where am I?
    Mehrune grew up in these deserts. Although he couldn't possible memorize these monotone sands, there was a point where he'd know where to go. What direction he'd be heading. The Badlands in their entirety felt familiar to him. Certain oasis hotspots were memorized, small establishments, common routes for Mahrjan travelers.. It was all familiar.
    For once, he felt truly lost in his homeland.

    This isn't natural.
    Mehrune sunk to his knees, before laying down completely. How long has he been wandering? And why did he stop running.
    One.. One day? Maybe?
    I've seen the sun fall once. Rise once.
    Almost a day.

    The hot sand almost felt refreshing to his worn, tanned face. He's become so used to how it feels. Each individual grain making it's own marking against his skin, having it's own heat, it's own mass. Only to be heated by one giant sun, and to be formed into one giant desert.

    What's wrong with me?
    He would've forgotten why he's been running, if he didn't remind himself every thirty minutes. At this point, part of him wanted to forget. He's failed. His family, his traditions, his honor. He failed himself. A failure
    Kill yourself.
    Why?

    "Enough..." The seasoned man muttered, shaking his head and realizing he almost dozed off face down in the sands. He stood back up, and continued to walk forward.

    Sand. These particular sands felt odd. Darker then they usually were. If that made any sense. It didn't make much to Mehrune, either.
    But the sands.. He swore he felt them move. Things were being shifted. His mind, the sand, the laws of nature..
    He heard children screaming faintly, in the distance.
    He could've sworn they were real screams. He could've sworn the sands moved. He also sworn, he stood up a few moments ago.

    Mehrune's eyes opened slowly. He lifted his head, and spat out a disturbing amount of sand from his mouth. He felt control over his body this time. Unfortunately, he wasn't sure if it's always been like this or not, for the past few hours. What was apparent though, is how long he's been walking. How tired he was, and how much faster his mind fades when not properly fed or rested.

    He stood up. Once more. Or, for the first time, compared to whatever is real. It didn't matter. What mattered, was this large, open gate he stood in front of.
    A fortress? It surprised him, turned him a bit more paranoid then he already was. Is this real? He stepped forward, walking inside the lush courtyard. It was odd seeing such an establishment in the middle of the Badlands, known for it's unlivable climate, unless you were a born resident.

    "Hello?" Mehrune called, with little caution. Surely, a castle such as this would provide aid for a wandering, bloadsoaked Mahrjan.
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    If One Only Knew..

    The badlands wasn't known for it's beauty, but it had it's hidden secrets. The fortress of this keep was well hidden deep in the sands of the desert, but it also housed beautiful gardens in it's small courtyards, and the flora just spawned nicely against the dullness of the sands. The building wasn't nothing too massive compared to a castle, but it made for a great home for the people who once lived their before they were massacred.

    Hidden down in the depths of this fortress held a room, or a series of rooms that kept prisoners, traitors etc. Chained to the wall of one of these not so tidy rooms was a woman with the reddest of hair, and eyes of a deep darkness. The woman sat on her knees, each scratched and bruised from being kicked and the like. Dangling from the chains her hands laid limp, her arms stuck above her head, while it rested on her chest. Her eyes just stared at the dirt, sometimes catching a glimpse of a rat here and there in her visual spectrum.

    It would bring one's curiosity to why this maiden stayed chained to the wall, battered and covered in dirt. It seemed the people of the keep didn't like the warning she had brought to them late one day, a girl taking her time to cross a nasty desert to warn an innocent family of a darkness that would engulf their home and their lives.

    Words haven't left the girls mouth since the day they chained her to the wall, since the moment she had her freedom taken away. She would mutter the words "Told you this would happen" but her throat was rough, and dry. Dehydration had taken it's part in her abuse, and she was forced to suffer with the pain of her reality, as well as the visions that plagued her as she watched the death of the keep come to them all. Eternity was locked away for what would seem like forever, unless someone found her.


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    He hadn't been within the structure long when the ground began trembling with a solid thud, it came from outside. Akaru averted his attention to the main doors that stood at the end of the Great Hall. Even here within this Keep, the Hall was large with cathedral ceilings that held paintings. Paintings from when this land was full of life and prosperity then as each painting was scanned over, the one to follow held drastic changes. Eventually Akaru seen that the last painting was unfinished. Akaru remained seated and awaited that which is outside to make it's presence known inside.Call it an open door policy, for now.

    Then a voice. Low and raspy broke through his thoughts. A woman's voice and by the sound of the simple few words she spoke he could tell she was a torture victim, dehydrated, and near death. Tuning into his sense somewhat he realized that she was just beneath him in the dungeons. A simple mind link opened up between the two as he offered a few words. " Do you wish to be free?" He taunted her with a smug tone to his voice. The mind link he had opened with her, he left open as a message was sent out to all those with a brain; near or far.

    " I am Akaru Vega Darkfire. The new king of the Darkfire Clan. I am one of few left in my bloodline and I plan to change that. Those who will stand with me, follow my voice as for those who appose me.... Come out come out where ever you are."

    With the invitation sent out, Akaru was sure to get some attention both good and terribly bad. The look upon his young flawless face showed no fear or doubt. His crimson eyes shone brightly in the candle light of the room as long black hair fell over his face just so that a shadow was cast across half his face. A hand rose up as he tucked the index finger and thumb of his right hand under his chin. There, he waited for the days adventures to take place. That night he would go and offer the woman in the dungeons her freedom if she so desired it. But even that would come with a price.

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    -His nostrils flared viciously as he took in the scent of this place. The stone was fresh with life, everything about this place screamed of life, and yet there was none to be found and no tell-tale signs that the life had been stifled out. He could not catch the scent of blood, or even that of tears. Whatever happened here was a mystery, and he wasn’t completely sure if it was worth pursuing. Instead he focused on exploring the space around him, before taking his humanoid form. Better that he be challenged in this shape, where his talons and fiery breath could certainly come in handy. However, there was a problem. There wasn’t much room to move about in; this courtyard simply wasn’t designed to accommodate a creature of his size. So as carefully as he could he tucked in his massive wings and settled his front body close to the ground to try and peek here and there.

    Mehrune, who was just entering the courtyard, would be met by the massive horned face of a red wyrm. His bright golden eyes would narrow on the individual before his enormous maw would open to reveal quite a line of sharp teeth. His first instinct was to call forth the fire that burned deep in his belly and to incinerate this individual for having startled him. But then there came another voice, one that he was certain this stranger would also hear. It was an invitation and a threat all rolled up into a nice little bundle.

    Slowly the red dragon pulled itself back onto its hind legs and sat majestically. His black talons craved at the stone floor before it began to diminish in size. Once it was about the size of a horse, its limbs began to change altogether with the most obvious sign of what was happening being the change that his facial features began to take. That monstrous face became smooth as ruby red scales sank back into porcelain white skin. Soon there was a young man standing in the same place where the dragon had been just moments ago, completely naked, save a thick black leather belt across his waist with elaborate silver work. And from this belt a rather impressive sword, that matched other impressive attributes of this youth.

    Lucis would offer a smile to Mehrune, “Did you hear that?” But before the stranger could answer, he was already walking toward the source.-

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    Darris stood at the edge of a cliff. He peered down to the bottom then up at the other side of the massive canyon. Beneath his feet the ice crept over the edge. In a just a moment a flurry of ice and snow whirled around his body. Slowly a bridge formed to cover the gap. Once the ice bridge connect with the other side, Darris crossed. With each step he took the ice seemed to re-attach itself to his body. Once his feet touched the ground upon the other side he took a swift notice to a change in scenery. The side from wince he cam was lush and green like a tropical forest where as the side he now stood seemed desolate and barren, void of life. The ground was hot and dry; sand replaced fertile dirt, sand replaced grass and small shrubbery, cactus' replaced trees and the horizon looked like fumes rising from the pits of the Nine themselves.

    His journey through the sands was long and perilous but Darris knew that this too shall pass along with all things. having to make a detour at the moving sands due to the mythical and majestic enchantments placed there neutralizing his own abilities. That was the first time he had ever encountered anything of that sort. Never had his ice been overpowered by another force. "A very interesting place we have here." He thought out loud. Just then a voice came into his mind. A man's voice offering sanctuary to those who pledge allegiance and death to any who oppose. A grin crept along his icy blue lips as he decided to follow the voice and have a look-see for himself. "What could it hurt? Join forces with those of this world. Maybe then I will be a step closer to vengeance upon my father, Set." A silent and private thought that was followed by narrowed eyes and furrowed eyebrows. A determined look washed over his features as his feet then continued forwards. The ice beneath his feet spreading further and further with each step. Pretty soon he had the Keep within view. Even from distance he seen the dragon as it melted down to it's human form. He could sense all those within the fortress, including that of the woman in shackles down in the dungeon.

    "We shall see if you are worthy..." His voice mocked at the idea of joining forces with someone.

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    Over the years many things had changed.Her way of thinking, her appearance ever so slightly, perhaps even the way she believed things should be done. The time away was good for her, good for the family, least in her mind anyways. One thing however remained the same, untarnished from the time spent away; the need to answer the call that flashed through the link she shared onlywith her kin.


    Dreamily her lids slide over her golden eyes at the sound of his voice. The feeling of home filled her with an emotion that one could only describe as tranquil. Always held to a higher standard, a favored creature among her fiends, one might even consider him to be a weakness to her. As stated before though, many things had changed....


    Within the center of the main room where he sat, a darkened mist began to accumulate. Wisps here and there in no distinct order followed by another and another until they created a whirled mass. Chaotically they swirled to and fro without warning dissipating, easing over her curvaceous form. Black leggings left little to the imagination of onlookers, while her buttoned up white blouse did much the same.


    Arms crossed under her bosom she looked upon the creature that sat in the chair that demanded authority. One thing was certain, time had changed him as well.


    Plump lips curled into a smile as she canted her head to the side ever so slightly. Her right hand hovered upward, palm out toward him.


    “Shall we go home?”


    It would not be a question that one would be allowed to linger on thinking about. As quickly as she had appeared black tendrils of mist began to travel up her legs. Should he wish to join her, he would indeed have to make quick work of taking her hand, else lose her again for who only knows how long this time.
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    Silence filled the air for only but a moment. A moment was all that was needed for one's mind to wander through the past; visiting memories of what once was and what could have been. Akaru remained there in his chair and still poised in thought with finger and thumb supporting his chin. Crimson hued orbs stared off down the great hall, but focused on nothing at all. His eyes were open, but all that was seen were memories floating around him like a vivid display of ghosts preforming the remembered actions of once upon a time.

    The still air became disturbed as a mist took form. At first Akaru thought this to be that of just another memory flooding in to haunt his mind. That thought soon faded as an aroma filled the air and then was followed by the manifestation of a woman. A desirable woman clad in provocative clothing with perfect skin. At first the face was unclear, but the scent struck home. He wanted to believe it to be so, but couldn't be sure. Then she spoke and made herself perfectly seen.

    "Mother?"

    he spoke hesitantly and in almost a whisper. He hand was outstretched to him as she instructed him to come home. He didn't need a moments thought for a reaction to take a natural sweep through his limbs. He stood and took her hand then bowed down, his right knee setting heavily against the stone floor. His head lowered in respect as she was given the upper hand to his life as always. To his amazement, it was her in every way and this brought joy to his blackened soul. His dead heart once again took life and began to beat. Almost short of breath as if he had just ran a mile in a humans body that had been way overdue for training. Then, he peered up at her and locked a crimson gaze to her own eyes.

    "My Queen.... I will go with you to the ends of the universe. Yes mother, let us go home."

    With that said, he waited as her tendrils of mist began to swirl about them both now. He felt at peace in this moment. He felt whole once more. He had all but forgotten the visitors that had arrived and he had yet to introduce himself personally to. In this moment, she was all that mattered.

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    As the mist engulfed their forms, the two were removed from this place; fading from existence like that of a shimmering specter only half manifested before whisking away on the coming winds. A charade of smoke and mirrors in a sense, but in truth it was a portal that opened up about their forms and allowed them safe travel to a place resting far away from here.

    When the mist cleared, there was still a tear in the air within the Great Hall. Just before the throne, where Akaru had sat moments ago, was now a jagged edged portal plainly and clearly in view. It's pull was like that of a vacuum much similar to that of the Abyss, but much less in strength; remaining simply as that of a coaxing hand luring any wandering souls that might happen upon it to step inside.

    Before the two were completely vanished from this place, Akaru sent a link to any who would hear him. His words would ring out through the minds of those already approaching and to those who resided afar.

    "Come to the door at my throne. Step through the looking glass and behold the glory of that which is the Darkfire name. Though be warned if thy intent is of malice or ill-will for there will be no sanctuary for thy tortured soul."

    Once Akaru and Justice vanished through the mist, the chains and shackles that bound the woman for so long broke free. The cold steel that once tarnished her skin now rusted and began to erode before her eyes. She was free of her bindings, but now served a higher cause. A force tugged at her and coaxed her up from the dungeons and would lead her through the ripple before the throne. It was Akaru that set her free and it would be him that she would now serve. As it was, her freedom came with a price.

    (exit Akaru to A Breath of Life. )

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    The chains around her hands and body rusted away at a moments notice, her eyes widened to the sight. Dropping to her knees her hands were released into her lap, a sigh of relief left her cracked dried lips. Hanging her head at her chest still, the woman felt something pulling at her from deep with in. Struggling to get to her feet, Eternity fell back down to her knees once more.

    "I ... I.."

    Another deep breath left her dried lips, pushing her hands at the dirty ground of the dungeon fighting to stand once more. With her feet planted as strongly as they could, using the walls she found herself pushing herself along the walls up through the different levels of the fortress. The calling was so strong, and it pulled her closer and closer to the room where the man had disappeared into a portal. Falling through the mirrored portal, Eternity disappeared from the very room that the man once stood.

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