A Shy One [Comic]

[Timeless.Love]

So...I know I don't do much of anything on here but post in a single thread called A Shy One. So in order to express how much I enjoy the thread and to attempt to be more involved in valucre, I decided to take some time and draw out the roleplay as a comic.

So far I have five pages sketched out but only the first one has been digitally outlined and colored. Forgive me, I'm not the best at drawing...nor at paneling...nor coloring, hahaha. But I figured it would be something to show for fun. I have three different versions of page one, maybe you guys can tell me which you prefer best so I know how to do the others?

I'm still working out this inserting picture thing...and I hope the sizes aren't too big. Let me know if they don't work..Just click on them

By the way, it's read manga style. [so uhm...start to the far right and go down to the next panel then up from there and down again till end.]

B & W

A Shy One pg 1 bw copy.jpg


Colored
A Shy One pg 1 colored.jpg

Sepia...kinda?

A Shy One pg 1 sepia.jpg

Of course the credit to the storyline goes to all in the A Shy One thread [Paradigm, Faustus, and myself]

And individual character's credit goes to its creator in the thread.

Hope you guys like it! I'll try to get another page colored and posted soon. It takes a lot of work, haha. Feel free to give me any advice to change suggestions as well =D

Mostly importantly though, I need to know if doing this is okay with Faustus and Paradigm, cause you guys didn't know about it and it's your characters I will be drawing. I apologize..Laexan doesn't look exactly like the pic in his character sheet...but I tried.

[supernal]

It's fine by me! (Faustus). I really like the concept of turning the storyline into a comic, I like all of the panels but lean more towards the colored version because who doesn't like colors, and cannot wait to see the rest of it.

So, in short: Fucking awesome.

[paradigm]

Same for me. I dig it.

[Timeless.Love]

First I would like to apologize for not giving the well deserved credit to [and not asking the permission of] Hummingbird for this comic as well, who contributed also to the thread by of course creating the land itself! So I'm very sorry for that =(

Secondly, thanks to everyone, including Hummingbird, who gave me permission to continue the manga. I'll try to get at least one page up a week. College classes can make it difficult.

Anywho...apologizes and thanks aside...onto page two! Sorry the fighting, blood, and gore doesn't occur till page three. The little word on the sword towards the bottom of the page is 'click' okay? -_-

I can't upload it like I did before because it looks blurry and nasty that way. So here's a link. It should look nicer here.



Enjoy! And I'm willing to hear any advice/comments/critiques =D

[Timeless.Love]

Page three finally! Forgive the utter messiness of it...I'm not the best at fighting scenes. Hopefully it doesn't look too confusing/comedic x_x

Ahem...enjoy.

[supernal]

AWESOME action shot.

[soulbrand]

AWESOME action shot.

Agreed.

[Timeless.Love]

Thanks guys! I tried =D

Hopefully they only get better! -fingers crossed-

[Timeless.Love]

Page four! Bare with me on the action scenes. Enjoy!

[supernal]

I don't mind bearing at all. I think your take on the way the action is unfolding works well with your artistic style. I know I'm going to sound like a broken record and yet it must be said. I like it. But, and I say this with utmost austerity, if I don't see Jericho I'm going to mess myself.

[Timeless.Love]

LOL Don't worry, Jericho should be appearing on page six if the panels go correctly [might be page seven]. So you should just have one more page to go then your character makes his appearance! Patience!

[Timeless.Love]

Alrightie then, time for page 5! Going through the panels, Jericho will be appearing on the next page! I'm finally reaching the third post in the thread...this comic is going to have a lot of pages if I don't lose my mind and manage to complete it! Haha. Ahem...

In addition, I'll need a description of Jericho's sword for the next page. And Laexan's as well...because I will be redesigning it so the sword doesn't look so plain [unless it's supposed to look plain].

Anywho, enjoy!

[Timeless.Love]

Alrightie then, page 6 is up! Sorry this wasn't up earlier...midterm season.

Jericho appears [finally]! I hope he is to your liking, Faustus, and if there's anything you wish to change, lemme know!

And sorry...this page is kinda overloaded with dialogue bubbles...gonna have to work on that.

Anywho, enjoy!

[Zenith]

Lmao! This is awesome!! Damn that red-head too!! /eyes Carlos/

[Confused Objectives]

I almost want to join the thread to get into the pictures.

;-;